i can only hope you'll hold me up when it hurts too much to take
i'll drop the rope and pull you up, don't think i'll leave your life at stake
and when you get weary i'll hold you dear to my heart
even though it was cold since the start, it's been melting in every memory of you.
This isn't a poem. I just wrote whatever came to my mind last night. It has significance to me.
your lips move slowly and touch mine. collisions like a car crash on both sides. i don't know why but i adore it. i see your flaws and they pluck my nerves as they would any other person but when your heads on my chest it just starts to sink in leaving no room for the demons inside me. you're insecure and breaking your walls down would be like a paralyzed patient at a mental hospital trying to escape. i could maybe get free.. if only i were able to climb the walls. i could possibly break your walls down if i had the ability to see over my own. if only there were one big wall and we were on the same side instead of opposites. it feels more like a maze of walls than just one huge barrier though. with one, you just need persistence. but in a maze you are easily lost and confused. so my attempt to love and be loved in return is in vain until i break down these walls. the same goes for you. maybe when we both find out what we need to do and do it, i'll meet you at the end of the maze.
Saturday, November 7, 2009
Posted by lolidntgetit at 10:00 AM
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I absolutely adore your style of thinking and the way you transfer those thought from your mind to the tips or your fingers and release it into literature is beautiful. You're going places.
thanks(:
that means a lot, especially since i'd love to do something with writing.
i just never thought it'd get me anywhere but it's still a fun hobby.
There is careers you can do that involve writing but even if you don't find something to put it towards other than just a hobby, the mind and creativity involved in writing is a talent and a strength that can take you to many, many hights. It takes a brilliant brain to be a writer.
very true (: i've been more confident in that lately.
Well that's very good to hear. [=
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